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Post by Admin on Sun Nov 25, 2012 7:56 am


View the full-sized picture: http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/9843/ch9x01poster.jpg

Download Part 1 here: http://www.sendspace.com/file/0gc62n
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Sorry if the english is not perfect!

Part 2 is coming soon (Jan/Febr 2013)

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Idea by: Bobby/ AwakenedWitch

Written by: Dennis/ ds7c (most of it)

Bobby/ Awakenedwitch (some parts)


It bases on a (true) story! Lady Gaga said in interviews that she felt followed by a ghost during the "Monster Ball Tour"






View full-size: http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/6639/123ha.jpg[/center]


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Re: Charmed 9x01: "Charmed Goes Gaga" Part 1 - Read it Now!

Post by AngelofWicca on Sun Nov 25, 2012 9:24 am

Bobby & Dennis you guys are so creative! As I read the "Gaga" part I was like this is a joke. but so interesting! I love it very extordinary. Smile
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Post by GellarProdz on Sun Nov 25, 2012 10:30 am

WOW!It's amazing I so much love the first banner!Who made it?Smile
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Post by ds7c on Sun Nov 25, 2012 10:44 am

GellarProdz wrote:WOW!It's amazing I so much love the first banner!Who made it?Smile

Thank you Smile Bobby made it!
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Post by Siennaleah on Sun Nov 25, 2012 10:58 am

This looks so real, amazing, can't wait to read this

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Post by Oved011Again on Sun Nov 25, 2012 3:46 pm

The idea and the thought of this sounds very interesting. I hope that the both of you are good writers with a big imagination. Writing is one of the most difficult things. I am looking forward for this series you are doing. Bless it Be.
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Post by GellarProdz on Sun Nov 25, 2012 8:55 pm

The first banner is really amazing!
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Post by GellarProdz on Sun Nov 25, 2012 8:56 pm

Btw,only real Gaga fans will estimate it!Razz
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Post by Siennaleah on Sun Nov 25, 2012 8:57 pm

I'm not necessarily a Gaga fan, I don't like all her songs, but i'm a fan of everyone's work on here Smile

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Post by UntalentedWarlock on Mon Nov 26, 2012 11:49 am

That's series about Phoebe and her daughter ?
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Post by ds7c on Mon Nov 26, 2012 12:39 pm

UntalentedWarlock wrote:That's series about Phoebe and her daughter ?

The season starts with Phoebe, Coop and their daughter Kelly. In this episode they will need to join together with the other sisters again. We haven't made any plans about the season, we just write this episode at the moment.
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Post by UntalentedWarlock on Mon Nov 26, 2012 1:10 pm

ds7c wrote:
UntalentedWarlock wrote:That's series about Phoebe and her daughter ?

The season starts with Phoebe, Coop and their daughter Kelly. In this episode they will need to join together with the other sisters again. We haven't made any plans about the season, we just write this episode at the moment.

Okay. Full episode was has time like original episode ? About 40 minutes ?
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Post by ds7c on Mon Nov 26, 2012 3:14 pm

Okay. Full episode was has time like original episode ? About 40 minutes ?

Yes!
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Post by Siennaleah on Sun Dec 02, 2012 8:17 pm

I don't usually like downloading stuff, 'cause my laptop doesn't have very much space for that, is there any way I can read it in a different way?

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Post by Admin on Mon Dec 03, 2012 12:43 pm

I could send it you, if you PM your e-mial to my account.
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Post by Siennaleah on Tue Dec 04, 2012 5:45 pm

Love it, but sometimes I found it a tad bit difficult to know who says what.

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Post by Oved011Again on Sat Dec 08, 2012 3:01 am

Okay, I know you are both very new at writing but I am going to give you some criticism and some criteria for you both to fix and improve your writing abilities. The manuscript and synthesize have very little realistic implications on how real professional practice or meaningful methods. This can be improved by reflecting on your experiential learning. I strongly urge to write more before publicizing such as writing more on your spare time whether it is something school related or what not. Through my introspective observations and clinical observation, I noticed that the characters that we know such as Phoebe and Piper do not fit within the same setting as we see them on television. This can be improved. I suggest you elaborate more on emotions, feelings, the setting and the physical position that is set around the characters. On interpretation of ideas-information, your conclusion consistent with a simple statement, this can be good and bad. I recommend you spend more time on developing more critical analysis such as making it simple but yet difficult. I know the idea is to prove that Lady Gaga is a demon but my question is. Does the writing convey clearly, accurately, and concisely the message that you as a writer want to send out to the audience? Is the general arrangement of the manuscript logical? Have you considered practicing in a different writing style? Typically, there are two ways of writing manuscripts and a story. One is writing is writing like a manuscript which consists of small focus on the setting and more focus on the verbal attention of the characters. Then there is writing like a story, a story is what your typical book would be, more focus on the action and setting and a good portion on the verbal communication.
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Post by ds7c on Sat Dec 08, 2012 7:47 am

I know. It was my time that I wrote a story in english so it wasn't easy for me. But thanks for your advice Smile
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Post by VanquishedSpirit on Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:42 pm

the link is broken. Sad
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Post by ds7c on Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:03 pm

VanquishedSpirit wrote:the link is broken. Sad

Where could I re-upload it?
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Post by VanquishedSpirit on Sat Jan 26, 2013 1:45 pm

SendSpace doesnt keep files on there for long, so just upload to sendspace again. Smile
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